In my quest to expose Sarasota Memorial Hospital-Venice’s dangerous policy of transferring seriously injured patients to the notorious North Tampa Behavioral Health Clinic without treating their injuries, I’m using all of my skills. One of them, is screenwriting. A movie has been made from a script I wrote that’s still available on major streaming services. A Hollywood producer has optioned a mystery TV series I wrote and is currently pitching it to network, cable and streaming outlets.
The thriller I wrote based on my horrific experience at the hands of the ER doctors and nurses at Sarasota Memorial Hospital-Venice and North Tampa Behavioral Clinic is called “Do No Harm”. The script set-up, especially, directly follows the way I was treated harshly by the ER at Sarasota Memorial Hospital-Venice.
To make the script interesting to the general public, I had to create a complex backstory involving a nurse at the hospital and a nurse at the behavioral clinic being involved in a pay-for patient referral kickback scheme. I’m still not sure whether this really happened, but it certainly makes sense since the nurse in charge of me sent me to the behavioral center with three clean breaks to my face — brow, eye socket and forehead — that could have killed or blinded me in the five days I was kept against my will. The hospital’s patient advocate said in a letter that I received appropriate medical care. That should scare the wits out of any thriller fan.
I’m currently reaching out to producers to purchase “Do No Harm”. If you know anyone who might be interested, please feel free to use the contact page to reach out. I look forward to hearing from you. I’ll also let you know when I sell the script.
As a pre-reward, here are the first two acts of of “Do No Harm” for your education and entertainment. They’ll give you a good idea of what it’s like to have Sarasota Memorial Hospital-Venice dump you at North Tampa Behavioral Health.
Do No Harm, written by Lawrence S. Richardson, Jr., US Copyright protected.
ACT 1 Do No Harm
INT. HALLWAY, EMERGENCY DEPARTMENT, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL, VENICE, FL — CURRENT, MIDNIGHT
BLACK SCREEN
NURSE PRITCHARD, middle-aged and bitter, wheels DAVE WARNER, a 35-year-old unconscious private detective in a hospital bed, up the dimly lit corridor. Dave’s entire left eye is purple and swollen. He has a cleanly-fractured brow, eye socket and cheek.
Nurse Pritchard takes out her cell phone, looks at Dave’s photo on a Web page and shakes her head like she can’t believe he’s her patient.
DAVE’S POV
The volume of the ER sounds — nurses, patients, equipment — gradually increases. Dave opens his eyes a crack and sees the ER’s dropped ceiling passing by.
He looks up and sees the nurse’s angry eyes over the top of the half-reclined bed.
DAVE
(groggy)
I… I didn’t hurt anyone did I?
NURSE PRITCHARD
(sharp)
No, but you sure did give the paramedics a hard time.
DAVE
I… I don’t remember.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Sure you don’t.
Dave appears confused by her aggressive responses.
END DAVE’S POV
INT. SUITE, EMERGENCY DEPARTMENT, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — CONTINUOUS
The nurse wheels Dave into an open suite. NURSE DANDY, young, and kind, starts hooking him up to an IV and machine that takes his vitals.
INTERCOM
Nurse Pritchard to the desk. Nurse Pritchard.
NURSE PRITCHARD
I’ll be right back to deal with this one.
Nurse Pritchard leaves.
DAVE
Why is she so angry?
Nurse Dandy motions to answer but hesitates out of fear.
NURSE DANDY
I… I don’t know.
DAVE
What am I doing here?
NURSE DANDY
You fell.
DAVE
I fell?
NURSE DANDY
Don’t you remember?
DAVE
I don’t remember anything.
NURSE DANDY
That’s because you were drunk.
DAVE
No, if I was that drunk I wouldn’t be talking to you. I’d be snoozing. So what happened?
NURSE DANDY
You fell in a bar.
DAVE
A bar? (pause) Now I remember.
NURSE DANDY
You remember falling?
DAVE
No, everything from when I fell til I just woke up here is a blank. I stopped at the bar for a few drinks to calm my nerves.
NURSE DANDY
Why were you nervous?
DAVE
A case I was working on… I can’t get into it. Can I please have my cell phone?
NURSE DANDY
No.
DAVE
Why not?
Nurse Pritchard walks in.
NURSE PRITCHARD
You’re under police protective custody.
DAVE
For what?
NURSE PRITCHARD
So you don’t hurt yourself or anyone else.
DAVE
I don’t want to hurt anyone. I just want to get treated for whatever’s wrong with me and get out of here.
NURSE PRITCHARD
And therein lies the problem.
DAVE
What?
NURSE PRITCHARD
Listen, the police say you wanted to drive off. Then you roughed up the paramedics.
DAVE
I told you I don’t remember any of that. I was knocked out. I’m certainly not going to rough up anyone now, so give me my phone.
NURSE PRITCHARD
No.
DAVE
You can’t imprison me without a trial.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Actually, I can.
DAVE
How?
NURSE PRITCHARD
Protective custody means you don’t get to do anything you want to do.
DAVE
I don’t know what happened while I was knocked out, but it can’t be that bad. I’m not under arrest am I?
NURSE PRITCHARD
No. Not yet.
DAVE
Then give me my phone.
NURSE
No.
DAVE
You’re insane.
NURSE PRITCHARD
It’s not my fault you’re in here.
DAVE
What kind of answer is that?
NURSE PRITCHARD
(to nurse Dandy)
Note his anger on his chart.
DAVE
You haven’t begun to see anger.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Note his threat, too.
A RADIOLOGIST walks in.
RADIOLOGIST
Mr. Warner?
DAVE
Yes! I’m sorry, I mean yes.
RADIOLOGIST
You’re up next in radiology.
DAVE
Can I please make a phone call first? I’m a private investigator from L.A. I’ve been chasing a case. No one knows I’m in the hospital.
The radiologist looks to Nurse Pritchard. She shakes her head no.
NURSE PRITCHARD
He’s to have no contact with the outside world.
RADIOLOGIST
Sorry. Let’s go.
DAVE
But–
NURSE PRITCHARD
Get going. The sooner you identify his injuries, and I doubt you’ll find anything, the sooner I can ship him out of here.
DAVE
So you are going to free me?
NURSE PRITCHARD
I didn’t say that.
Dave SIGHS with frustration.
The radiologist wheels Dave out of the room.
DAVE
What kind of world is this where an alert, responsible man can be held against his will?
INT. HALLWAY, EMERGENCY DEPARTMENT, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — CONTINUOUS
RADIOLOGIST
Man, your face is messed up. How do you feel?
DAVE
You know you’re the first one to ask me that in this so-called hospital?
RADIOLOGIST
And?
DAVE
My face is numb on the left side from my forehead to my mouth. My ribs are screaming bloody murder.
Dave bites down and winces.
DAVE
The upper left part of my mouth flexes when I bite down.
RADIOLOGIST
Considering you face-planted on hard tile, that sounds about right. Let’s see what’s going on.
INT. RADIOLOGY DEPARTMENT, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL–CONTINUOUS
The radiologist wheels Dave into a room with a CAT scan machine.
INT. SUITE, EMERGENCY DEPARTMENT, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL–HALF-HOUR LATER
Dave’s in bed staring intensely at the ceiling. Nurse Dandy walks in.
NURSE DANDY
How are you?
DAVE
Wow, a second person actually shows concern.
NURSE DANDY
I’m always concerned about my patients.
DAVE
You certainly don’t show it when Bride of Frankenstein–
Nurse Pritchard barges in carrying a clipboard.
NURSE PRITCHARD
You certainly don’t mean me.
DAVE
Of course not.
NURSE PRITCHARD
We have your results.
DAVE
And?
NURSE PRITCHARD
You fractured your face.
DAVE
I could have told you that. The upper left part of my mouth is flexing like a bow.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Here.
She hands him the clipboard and a pen.
DAVE
What’s this?
NURSE PRITCHARD
We’re sending you to another facility for treatment.
DAVE
Thank God. I’m not surprised you can’t handle fractures in this prison.
Dave studies the form and is shocked.
DAVE
What’s this?
NURSE PRITCHARD
I need you to Marchman Act yourself.
DAVE
What’s that?
NURSE PRITCHARD
The state of Florida assumes control over your welfare for 72 hours.
DAVE
(angry)
You’re asking me to commit myself!!!???
NURSE PRITCHARD
No, they are.
Four SHERIFF’S DEPUTIES wearing wide-brimmed law officer hats file in and stand at attention at the end of Dave’s bed.
DAVE
You have to be kidding me!!!??? What are you going to do to me if I don’t sign?
One of the law officers jiggles the handcuffs attached to his belt.
DAVE
For what!!!??? If I did something wrong, why didn’t you arrest me in the first place?
NURSE PRITCHARD
You’re wasting their time.
LAW OFFICER ONE
She’s right.
Dave SIGHS and signs.
DAVE
(mutters)
I’m going to sue you all for wrongful imprisonment.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Good luck with that.
DAVE
Why?
NURSE PRITCHARD
We’re covered by sovereign immunity. The most you’ll get is $250,000. No lawyer’s going to take that lowball case.
DAVE
You sound like you’ve done this before.
Nurse Pritchard takes the clipboard and checks the forms. She nods at the law officers. They file out.
DAVE
Who are you, the Godfather?
Nurse Pritchard responds with an evil grin and nod.
Two AMBULANCE ATTENDANTS wheel a gurney in.
DAVE
Who are you?
NURSE PRITCHARD
They’re your ride.
DAVE
Ride, where?
NURSE PRITCHARD
The Tampa Bay Behavioral Clinic.
DAVE
That doesn’t sound like a hospital.
NURSE PRITCHARD
It’s not.
DAVE
What is it then?
NURSE PRITCHARD
It’s an alcohol addiction treatment center.
DAVE
I’m not a drunk!
NURSE PRITCHARD
You were when you were roughing up the paramedics.
DAVE
Can they treat my broken face at this… this clinic?
NURSE PRITCHARD
No.
DAVE
No!!!???
NURSE PRITCHARD
It’s not that bad. We stabilized you. Under the law, that’s our only responsibility to you.
DAVE
I could bleed out or have a stroke without treatment.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Stop being so dramatic.
DAVE
I could.
NURSE PRITCHARD
(to the ambulance attendants)
Move him onto the gurney.
They bring the gurney to the side of the bed.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Get on there.
Dave motions to do it. Agony appears on his face.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What’s wrong with you now?
DAVE
My ribs feel they’re being hit by a truck.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Then go faster.
Dave shifts onto the gurney.
NURSE PRITCHARD
(to the ambulance attendants)
You know the routine.
DAVE
You really have done this to other victims?
Nurse Pritchard ignores him.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Please put your wrists on both side rails.
DAVE
You’re going to restrain me?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
It’s company policy.
DAVE
I’m going to sue you, too.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
I’m sorry you feel that way.
DAVE
But you’re not sorry you’re restraining me like a madman?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Please.
Dave puts his wrists on the side rails. They tie them in place.
DAVE
(to Nurse Pritchard)
You’re evil, you know that.
NURSE PRITCHARD
I’m not the one tied to a hospital bed. Get him out of here.
Nurse Pritchard watches as they wheel him out. Nurse Dandy walks in with a clipboard.
NURSE DANDY
Excuse me, Nurse Pritchard. I know it’s not my place to question–
NURSE PRITCHARD
Then don’t.
NURSE DANDY
It’s just a practical question for future reference.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What is it?
NURSE DANDY
Are you sure sending him to detox is the right thing to do? He has three clean breaks in his brow, eye socket and cheek. Couldn’t he die if he falls or someone hits him?
NURSE PRITCHARD
Are you questioning Dr. Maynard’s decision?
NURSE DANDY
Did Dr. Maynard look at his CAT scan?
NURSE PRITCHARD
(lying)
Of course. You know I put patient safety first in all cases.
Nurse Dandy looks like she doubts her.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Get back to work before I give you a second shift.
Nurse Pritchard leaves the room. Nurse Dandy shakes her head with disgust.
ACT 2 Do No Harm
INT. NURSING STATION, ER, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Pritchard looks around to make sure no one is near, then picks up the phone at the empty nursing station and makes a call.
NURSE PRITCHARD
It’s me. I found a sap for you. Throw the book at him.
(pause)
I can’t tell you why right now. Just do it. Oh, and wire my finder’s fee today. You were two days late last time and I really need the cash.
Nurse Dandy walks by.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Gotta go.
Nurse Pritchard hangs up.
EXT. AMBULANCE ENTRANCE, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — 15 MINUTES LATER
The ambulance attendants wheel Dave’s gurney to the rear of the ambulance.
DAVE
Where are you taking me?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
The detox center.
DAVE
I know that. Where is it located?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Nowhere.
The attendants LAUGH.
DAVE
Where’s nowhere?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
You’ll find out.
The attendants load Dave into the back of the ambulance.
INT. AMBULANCE — CONTINUOUS
The bed clips a small fire extinguisher, knocking it off the wall. Dave moves the injured side of his face quickly away from where the extinguisher hits his pillow.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
You have quick reflexes.
DAVE
See, I’m not hungover. Let me out of here and we’ll call it a day.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Very funny. Let’s go.
EXT. AMBULANCE ENTRANCE, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — CONTINUOUS
Attendant One gets in the back. Attendant Two goes to the front to drive.
INT. AMBULANCE — CONTINUOUS
The ambulance pulls away from the hospital.
DAVE
Hey, can you do me a favor?
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Depends on what it is.
DAVE
Give me my phone.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
No.
DAVE
Why not? I already committed myself for 72 hours.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
It’s against company policy, and your hands are literally tied.
DAVE
You could untie them.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
If I want to get fired.
Dave struggles with the restraints.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Stop it, or we’ll have to turn around.
Dave stops.
DAVE
There’s no way in hell I’m going back to that insane asylum. My only hope is the next insane asylum has a shred of decency.
Ambulance Attendant One smirks and looks out the front window.
DAVE
What’s that face for?
Ambulance Attendant One shakes his head.
EXT. TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC, WESLEY CHAPEL, FL — AN HOUR LATER
The ambulance pulls up to the treatment center’s rear entrance. The large one-story building with three ward spokes off a central hub is surrounded by farm land.
INT. AMBULANCE — CONTINUOUS
DAVE
You weren’t kidding when you said you were taking me nowhere. There’s as much cows as corn out here.
Ambulance Attendant Two opens the rear door. Both attendants roll Dave’s gurney out the back of the ambulance.
EXT. TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC — CONTINUOUS
A muscular, heavily tattooed INTAKE NURSE exits the back of the building and checks his clipboard.
INTAKE NURSE
Mr. Warner?
DAVE
Unfortunately.
INTAKE NURSE
Let’s go on inside.
They wheel him into the intake area.
INT. FRONT DESK, INTAKE AREA, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC — CONTINUOUS
Dave tries to lift his hands.
DAVE
Can you take these off?
The intake nurse nods. The ambulance attendants untie Dave and help him off the gurney. He grimaces in agony from his bruised ribs.
INTAKE NURSE
You’re in rougher shape than I thought.
DAVE
So send me to a real hospital.
INTAKE NURSE
No can do.
Ambulance Attendant Two hands the nurse a clipboard. The nurse signs it.
AMBULANCE ATTENDANT ONE
Can we go?
INTAKE NURSE
Yah. See you later.
DAVE
I’m not the only one you do this to?
INTAKE NURSE
As long as there’s addiction in the world, we’ll be here.
DAVE
But I’m not addicted.
The Intake Nurse SCOFFS.
DAVE
I’m not. I… I may have had one drink too many last night, but that doesn’t make me an addict.
INTAKE NURSE
What does?
DAVE
You know what I mean.
INTAKE NURSE
No, I don’t.
DAVE
I mean that one bad night doesn’t mean I’m an addict who needs treatment.
INTAKE NURSE
How many nights does?
DAVE
Be reasonable.
INTAKE NURSE
I am. Follow me.
Dave follows the nurse into a private room.
INT. PRIVATE ROOM, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC — CONTINUOUS
INTAKE NURSE
Strip and put on this gown.
DAVE
You want me to wear a johnny?
INTAKE NURSE
It’s the team uniform.
The intake nurse leaves. In agony, Dave strips and puts the gown on. The intake nurse knocks on the door.
DAVE
Come in.
The intake nurse enters.
INTAKE NURSE
Do you mind if I pat you down?
DAVE
Of course I mind, but I know I’m not going to get my way no matter what I say.
The intake nurse pats him down. Dave winces when he touches his ribs.
INTAKE NURSE
Were you in a fight?
DAVE
(annoyed)
Not yet.
INTAKE NURSE
Your stay here will be a lot easier if you just chill.
DAVE
Would you chill if you were in my shoes?
INTAKE NURSE
You’re not wearing shoes.
DAVE
If you were in my hospital socks?
INTAKE NURSE
Cheer up. The food isn’t half bad here.
DAVE
Can I have my phone?
INTAKE NURSE
No.
DAVE
Why not?
INTAKE NURSE
It’s against policy.
DAVE
Why?
INTAKE NURSE
We want you to detox without interference.
DAVE
Do I look like I need detox?
The Intake Nurse holds up a hand mirror. Dave sees his half-purple face and swollen eye and shakes his head.
DAVE
Okay, do I sound like I need detox?
INTAKE NURSE
Actually, no, but someone somewhere along the line decided you needed to be here, so just chill. You’ll be out of here before you know it.
The intake nurse presents a pair of hospital pants.
INTAKE NURSE
Put these on.
Dave puts on the pants.
A KNOCK sounds on the door.
INTAKE NURSE
Come in.
DR. BAIN, a slick young psychologist, enters the room.
DR. BAIN
Who are you?
DAVE
Dave Warner. And you?
DR. BAIN
Dr. Bain. I’ll be supervising your detox.
DAVE
Is there anyway you can put me, you know, on the accelerated plan?
DR. BAIN
No. We’re going to be friends for at least the next 72 hours.
DAVE
At least?
DR. BAIN
We can extend your stay if we decide you haven’t fully detoxed.
DAVE
It should be quick since I don’t need to detox.
Dr. Bain holds up a folder with Dave’s name on it.
DR. BAIN
Says here you do.
DAVE
Isn’t there any way you could shorten my stay? I have time sensitive work to complete.
DR. BAIN
It’s not my fault you’re here.
Dave considers his choice of words.
DAVE
Do you know the Bride of Frankenstein, I mean Nurse Pritchard?
DR. BAIN
(lying)
No, why?
DAVE
Just asking.
DR. BAIN
(to intake nurse)
Did you process him?
INTAKE NURSE
No, I was about to start the paperwork.
DR. BAIN
I can do it.
INTAKE NURSE
You don’t usually.
DR. BAIN
Mr. Warner needs top-level care. He was unusually combative with the police, paramedics and doctors and nurses at Venice Memorial.
DAVE
I was not!
DR. BAIN
Says here you were.
DAVE
Why am I being railroaded!!!??? Seriously! Why!!!???
DR. BAIN
You know why.
Dr. Bain pretends to down a shot and wipe his lips. The intake nurse LAUGHS.
DAVE
Just because I had a few drinks doesn’t make me a drunk.
DR. BAIN
Let’s go.
DAVE
Aren’t you going to put me in a wheelchair?
DR. BAIN
There’s no valet service where you’re going.
Dr. Bain opens a door that leads into the clinic and leads Dave down a hallway.
INT. CENTRAL HALLWAY, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC — CONTINUOUS
A dozen KIDS supervised by an ACTIVITY DIRECTOR burst out of a gym. Some of the kids are talking and laughing, others appear sad and withdrawn. The activity director leads them through a door into their wing of the facility.
DAVE
What are those kids doing here?
DR. BAIN
The same thing you are.
DAVE
They’re drunks?
DR. BAIN
No, not all of them. They have behavioral issues so their parents or the state sent them here for behavioral modification.
DAVE
Wow. I didn’t think they institutionalized kids anymore.
DR. BAIN
Only the really hard cases, like you.
DAVE
Would you stop saying that?
They arrive at the adult addiction treatment center.
DR. BAIN
Home sweet home.
Dr. Bain uses a key fob to unlock the double doors. They open automatically.
INT. LOBBY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL HEALTH — CONTINUOUS
Dr. Bain leads Dave into the adult addiction treatment ward and up to a nursing desk. Stern faced NURSE CROSS taps away on a computer.
NURSE CROSS
Who’s this?
DR. BAIN
David Warner. Can we use conference room B?
NURSE CROSS
Help yourself.
Dr. Bain leads Dave into the conference room, which has all glass windows that look out on twenty PATIENTS watching TV.
The patients include: LENA CARTER, a middle aged and worn crack addict, CANDY BROOKS, a beautiful young hooker and heroin addict, NICK DEAN, a handsome and charming pill popper, MARCUS KING, a massive,angry drunk, TASHA JACKSON, a streetwise cocaine addict, NINA LOPEZ, a nice person looking for a way out of heroin addiction, SINCLAIR CAMERON, a snobbish and wealthy addict who uses anything he can get his hands on, and RED HAINES, a fiery redhead addict.
Marcus King orders other patients off the couch so he can kanoodle with Red Haines.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM B, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL HEALTH — CONTINUOUS
Dave looks through the glass.
DAVE
You run quite the hotel here.
DR. BAIN
You’re all the same to me: Addicts.
Dave SIGHS.
DR. BAIN
Sit down.
Dave sits across from Dr. Bain. Dr. Bain looks at his clipboard.
DR. BAIN
I have all your medical information from the hospital, so let’s make this quick. Do you know why you’re here?
DAVE
Quite frankly, no. I have no idea why the emergency room would send a sober man with a fractured face to a treatment center instead of treating his dangerous facial injuries.
DR. BAIN
So you’re sticking to that story?
DAVE
I am because it’s true.
DR. BAIN
You know, Mr. Warner, everyone in that room out there denied they were addicted when I met with them.
DAVE
So.
DR. BAIN
The first step to your recovery is admitting you have an addiction.
DAVE
I may or may not have had one too many drinks when I fell, but this is certainly not standard procedure for me. Now what do I have to do to get out of here and get the real medical care I need?
DR. BAIN
You’re required to stay 72 hours. Then we’ll evaluate your progress.
DAVE
(sarcastic)
My progress.
DR. BAIN
I’d get rid of that attitude first if I were you. That’s the antithesis of progress.
DAVE
I’m only stating the truth, and you know it. What’s really going on around here?
DR. BAIN
What do you mean?
DAVE
I shouldn’t be here, but here I am. It doesn’t make sense. So, I’ll ask again, what’s really going on around here?
NURSE GRACE, a kind young nurse, knocks on the door.
DR. BAIN
That’s it for me.
DAVE
Am I going to see you again?
DR. BAIN
We’ll see.
DAVE
Isn’t psychiatric counseling required here?
DR. BAIN
I don’t like to waste my time on lost causes.
DAVE
Or patients who don’t need you.
Dr. Bain looks up at Nurse Grace who’s waiting patiently outside the door.
DR. BAIN
Come in!
Nurse Grace enters.
NURSE GRACE
Sorry to interrupt, Dr. Bain. Nurse Cross said we have a new patient.
DR. BAIN
He’s all yours.
Dr. Bain leaves.
DAVE
He’s quite the charmer.
NURSE GRACE
Hi, Mr. Warner, I’m Nurse Grace. I’m going to show you around, you know, get you situated.
DAVE
I wish you could show me the way out.
Nurse Grace LAUGHS.
NURSE GRACE
Trust me, everyone does. I’ll do my best to make sure you’re comfortable during your stay.
DAVE
That’s awfully nice of you.
NURSE GRACE
Follow me.
They leave the conference room.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WING — CONTINUOUS
Dr. Bain walks up to Nurse Cross who is still typing away at the computer.
DR. BAIN
What do you know about Mr. Warner?
NURSE PRITCHARD
Only what’s in his file. Why?
DR. BAIN
He seems uncommonly inquisitive. With all the other investigations going on, the home office doesn’t need anymore trouble from us.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What do you want me to do?
DR. BAIN
Keep an eye on him, and let me know what he’s really up to.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Will do.
EXT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Grace leads Dave down the ward hallway. Doors along both walls are open to rooms with twin beds with rubber mattresses.
Nurse Grace stops at Room 3B.
NURSE GRACE
This is your room.
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
They enter the room, which has two beds and an attached bathroom with a standup shower but no mirrors or anything that could be used by patients to harm themselves or others. The bed has a pillow, simple sheet and blanket on it along with a folded bath towel.
NURSE GRACE
This is your bed.
DAVE
Do you have one that doesn’t look like a bouncy house?
Nurse Grace CHUCKLES.
NURSE GRACE
They tell me they’re surprisingly comfortable.
She hands him a paper bag.
DAVE
What’s this?
NURSE GRACE
Soap, toothbrush, toothpaste, that sort of stuff.
Dave takes the toothbrush out. It’s a few inches long with a wide handle.
DAVE
So we don’t hurt ourselves brushing?
NURSE GRACE
Safety first. You’d be surprised by what people can do with a full-size toothbrush. Follow me.
INT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD – CONTINUOUS
They walk up the hallway toward the TV room.
NURSE GRACE
This is the laundry room, just put any clothes you want washed in a paper bag and we’ll do the rest.
DAVE
Am I supposed to walk around naked while you wash my clothes?
Nurse Grace LAUGHS and blushes.
NURSE GRACE
We’ll give you a second set of clothing.
INT. LOBBY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
They arrive back in the lobby with the attached TV room.
NURSE CROSS
Okay, everyone in line for vitals, then we’ll distribute your meds!
The patients line up.
DAVE
Vitals?
NURSE GRACE
We take them every four hours.
DAVE
Day and night?
NURSE GRACE
Safety–
DAVE
First. I get it. How can people recover if they can’t get a good night’s sleep?
NURSE GRACE
Somehow they manage. You will, too.
NURSE CROSS
David Warner! Let’s go!
Dave passes the line of patients.
NICK DEAN
(to Dave)
What the hell happened to you, man?
DAVE
I fell.
The patients LAUGH.
SINCLAIR
Looks like you fell on someone’s fist.
DAVE
You should see the other guy.
NICK DEAN
I knew it. Man, a brawler. Marcus’s going to love you.
DAVE
Who’s Marcus?
NICK DEAN
You’ll find out soon enough.
NURSE CROSS
Mr. Warner!
Nurse Grace leads Dave toward the front of the line. Red Haines, the angry red-headed female addict, blocks her.
RED HAINES
Don’t you go cutting me.
NURSE GRACE
Nurse Cross called for him.
Red puts her hand on her shoulder and locks on.
RED HAINES
Yah, well I said no.
GRACE
Ow!
DAVE
I’m not missing my appointment because you can’t behave yourself.
Dave removes Red’s hand from Nurse Grace’s shoulder.
RED HAINES
Don’t you touch me! Don’t you touch me! You ain’t cutting me neither.
Red throws a punch at the left side of his face. Dave ducks it. The other patients CHEER.
NICK DEAN
Fight! Fight! Fight!
Nurse Cross appears in the doorway of the examination room.
NURSE CROSS
Stop! Now!
RED HAINES
They was cutting–
NURSE CROSS
Another word out of you and you’re going to the isolation room.
Red gets in line.
NURSE CROSS
Mr. Warner, I don’t know what you did to cause this ruckus, but never do it again.
DAVE
I was just.
NURSE CROSS
Get in here.
Dave enters the examination room.
INT. EXAMINATION ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
NURSE CROSS
Roll up your sleeve.
She puts a blood pressure cuff on Dave’s arm and pops a thermometer in his mouth. She notes the measurements. She takes the thermometer out of his mouth.
NURSE CROSS
You can leave.
DAVE
I don’t get a lollipop.
NURSE CROSS
I don’t like you.
DAVE
I get the feeling you don’t like anyone.
NURSE CROSS
You know we keep score around here. I can make life very difficult for you.
DAVE
I can’t imagine how you can make it any worse.
Dave leaves.
NURSE CROSS
Lena Carter!
INT. LOBBY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Grace leads Dave over to a window with a closed metal rolling shutter on it.
NURSE GRACE
Thank you for helping me with Red.
DAVE
Are they all wildcats?
NURSE GRACE
No, actually most of the patients are very nice people.
The PHARMACIST opens the rolling window.
PHARMACIST
And you are?
DAVE
David. David Warner.
The Pharmacist checks his clipboard then picks up a tiny sample cup with a half dozen pills in it.
PHARMACIST
Here you go.
DAVE
What are you giving me?
PHARMACIST
Well, the main event is Ativan.
DAVE
What’s that for?
PHARMACIST
It’s to help you through alcohol withdrawal.
DAVE
What if I’m not an alcoholic?
PHARMACIST
That’s between you and Dr. Bain. He prescribed it.
DAVE
What are the side-effects?
PHARMACIST
It’ll help you with your anxiety but it’s also a benzoid, so it can be habit forming.
DAVE
You’re giving me an addictive drug to quit an addiction?
PHARMACIST
I’m not giving you a strong enough dose to lead to trouble, just enough to take the edge off.
DAVE
(to Nurse Grace)
What do you think?
NURSE GRACE
It’s pretty standard practice around here.
DAVE
I trust you but not the treatment center. Guess I’ll take it.
Dave takes the pills with a cup of water.
DAVE
(to Nurse Grace)
What do I do now?
NURSE GRACE
The only real requirements are that you line up to have your vitals taken and for meals and meds. We also recommend that you attend daily group and one-on-one sessions with Dr. Bain.
DAVE
In other words, sleep or watch a lot of TV?
Nurse Grace shrugs.
NURSE GRACE
If you do what they tell you to do, you’ll get out of here a lot sooner than if you don’t.
DAVE
So they tell me.
NURSE GRACE
You can also go outside during–
DAVE
Recess. I went to elementary school. What’s really going on here?
NURSE GRACE
What do you mean?
DAVE
I’m not an alcoholic and, from what I can tell, this isn’t a real treatment center. What am I doing here?
Nurse Grace’s face flushes.
NURSE GRACE
I don’t know what you’re talking about.
DAVE
I thought you were different.
NURSE GRACE
I am.
DAVE
Okay, how many beds are there here?
NURSE GRACE
Thirty-six.
DAVE
How many are empty today?
NURSE GRACE
Six, I guess. Five, now that you’re here.
DAVE
Congratulations.
NURSE GRACE
For what?
DAVE
You filled another bed with a paying customer.
NURSE GRACE
I didn’t–
DAVE
Nice knowing you.
Dave walks away. Nurse Grace appears hurt. Red Haines walks over.
RED HAINES
What’s the matter, you’re boyfriend break up with you?
NURSE GRACE
Mind your own business.
Nurse Grace walks away.
RED HAINES
Boo-the-Hell-who.
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave sits on a plastic seat.
DAVE
(to Nick Dean)
What’s are you watching?
NICK DEAN
What do you think?
DAVE
Cops?
NICK DEAN
Yep.
DAVE
Why?
NICK DEAN
Gives us pointers for when we get out.
Nick and the other patients LAUGH.
DAVE
Have you all been in here before?
Nick nudges Marcus King.
NICK DEAN
Have we been in here before, Marcus?
MARCUS KING
What do you think, Mother Fucker?
Nick LAUGHS.
DAVE
I think I’ll go take a nap.
Dave leaves them.
MARCUS KING
That dude’s a narc.
NICK DEAN
He definitely doesn’t belong here.
MARCUS KING
Nothing I hate more than a narc.
Marcus pounds his fist into his palm.
NICK DEAN
Don’t do anything to him until we’re sure. You don’t want to get sent to the real slam for nothing.
MARCUS KING
Don’t tell me what to do, cracker.
NICK DEAN
Easy. Just friendly advice, dude. You know you’re allergic to prison.
Red Haines saunters in and sits in Marcus’ lap.
RED HAINES
What’s Daddy doing?
MARCUS KING
This is good. Don’t go anywhere.
Marcus gets up.
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave goes to his room and lays down on his bed. Getting down and up is extremely painful for him due to his broken ribs.
He leans back, SIGHS and stares at the ceiling. His moment of peace is broken when Marcus King barrels in and looms over him.
MARCUS KING
What you doing in my room?
DAVE
They assigned this bed to me.
MARCUS KING
I don’t care what they did. I don’t want you in here.
DAVE
Then take it up with management.
Marcus grabs the front of Dave’s shirt and cocks his fist.
DAVE
Can I get some help in here!!!???
Nick Dean runs in with the other patients.
NICK DEAN
Fight! Fight! Fight!
Nurse Cross barges in and shoves her way though the crowd.
NURSE CROSS
Out of my way!
She sees Marcus.
NURSE CROSS
What did he do to you?
DAVE
He–
NURSE CROSS
I’m not talking to you.
MARCUS KING
He wised off at me.
NURSE CROSS
(to Dave)
Didn’t take you long to upset the apple cart again.
DAVE
I didn’t–
NURSE CROSS
Marcus, let him go.
Marcus hesitates.
NURSE CROSS
Marcus!
Marcus let’s Dave go.
DAVE
Mr. Marcus seems a little angry at me. Can I be assigned to a different room?
NURSE CROSS
No.
DAVE
Why not?
NURSE CROSS
Part of your rehabilitation is learning to cope with difficult people in healthy ways.
DAVE
I don’t see how getting my head knocked off is going to make me healthier.
Nurse Cross gets in his face.
NURSE CROSS
Get it through your head: You’re not in charge here. I am. And I said no. Now I have work to do. All you hooligans, get out.
They leave. Dave and Marcus are left alone. Dave turns away from him and closes his eyes.
MARCUS KING
You look tough all purpled up like that, but you’re my bitch. My bitch. Don’t you forget it.
Marcus leaves. Dave shakes his head and SIGHS.
DAVE
(mutters)
72 hours.
INT. CAFETERIA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — 5 PM
Nurse Cross and Nurse Grace hold double doors open while the patients file in. Looking miserable, Dave’s the last one in. The patients stand in line at a counter where two CAFETERIA ATTENDANTS dole out their food.
Exhausted, Dave sits at a table and rests his face on his arms.
NURSE CROSS
Mr. Warner, no sitting until you get your food.
DAVE
What is this, elementary school?
NURSE CROSS
No. Elementary school kids would know not to sit before they get their meal.
Dave gets up and joins the line.
RED HAINES
Look at you, always wanting special treatment.
DAVE
I don’t want special treatment, I just want to do my 72 hours and get the hell out of here.
RED HAINES
You really think you’re only here 72 hours?
DAVE
You don’t?
RED HAINES
You got good insurance?
DAVE
Pretty good.
Red Haines LAUGHS.
DAVE
What’s so funny?
RED HAINES
They’re going to bleed you dry before they’ll let you go.
Dave looks at her like she’s crazy.
CAFETERIA ATTENDANT ONE
Trays.
Red and Dave hand their trays to the cafeteria attendants.
CAFETERIA ATTENDANT ONE
You want salisbury steak and gravy or spaghetti and meat sauce?
DAVE
I’ll take the brown thing on the left.
CAFETERIA ATTENDANT ONE
Brown thing it is.
The cafeteria attendant spoons out salisbury steak, mashed potatoes and overcooked mixed vegetables.
CAFETERIA ATTENDANT ONE
Dessert?
DAVE
What do you have?
CAFETERIA ATTENDANT ONE
Jello or pudding.
DAVE
Of course, can’t hurt yourself with those. I’ll take the jello.
The cafeteria attendant puts it on his tray.
Dave goes to the drink dispenser and reaches for a cup. Marcus King knocks his hand out of the way.
MARCUS KING
That’s my cup.
DAVE
Help yourself.
Marcus fills his cup with soda, drinks and then fills it again, much to Dave’s annoyance.
DAVE
My food’s getting cold.
MARCUS KING
I don’t care if your food’s freezing over.
Dave tries to get his cup under another dispenser. Marcus nudges him out of the way. Dave SIGHS and leaves the dispenser and sits alone at a table. Marcus walks over to him.
MARCUS KING
That’s my table.
DAVE
(growls)
I’ve had enough of you.
Dave flips the table over at Marcus. Nurse Cross and Nurse Grace rush over.
NURSE CROSS
Stop it!
NICK DEAN
Fight! Fight! Fight!
Marcus grabs Dave and punches him in the stomach. Dave’s hunched over sucking for air. A SECURITY GUARD rushes in. The security guard pulls a taser.
SECURITY GUARD
Break it up! Now!
Marcus winds up to punch Dave in the face.
SECURITY GUARD
Marcus, I said stop!
Marcus hesitates and lets Dave go.
SECURITY GUARD
What’s going on here?
MARCUS KING
This dude’s always in my face.
SECURITY GUARD
(to Nurse Cross)
Is that true?
NURSE CROSS
Yes.
Dave glowers at her. Nurse Grace is disappointed by her response.
SECURITY GUARD
Come with me.
Dave leaves with the security guard.
NURSE CROSS
(to Nurse Grace)
Go with them.
RED HAINES
That’s right. Go look after your man.
Nurse Grace glowers at her.
NURSE CROSS
Go.
Nurse Grace leaves.
INT. SECURITY GUARD’S OFFICE, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WING — CONTINUOUS
SECURITY GUARD
Sit.
Dave and Nurse Grace sit before the security guard’s desk.
The security guard types on a computer keyboard and studies a report.
NURSE GRACE
(to Dave)
Are you okay?
DAVE
Is ok aching from head to toe?
SECURITY GUARD
Mr. Warner?
DAVE
Yes.
SECURITY GUARD
Says you’ve been here eight hours, you’ve already been in three altercations.
DAVE
I didn’t start any of them.
SECURITY GUARD
Of course not. You realize if you don’t become more cooperative, we can extend your stay until your behavior improves, or, worse, send you to a state facility. If you don’t like it here, you REALLY won’t like it there.
DAVE
But–
SECURITY GUARD
There are no buts here. We’re here to help you, but we can’t if you don’t follow our directions.
DAVE
What if I tell you I’m being framed?
SECURITY GUARD
What if I tell you every patient I haul in here tells me that same thing?
DAVE
But–
SECURITY GUARD
Lesson one: No buts. Now go back, finish your dinner, and stop making trouble.
Dave and Nurse Grace get up and step toward the door.
SECURITY GUARD
Oh, and, Mr. Warner.
DAVE
Yes.
The security guard aims his taser at Dave.
SECURITY GUARD
If you get in another fight, I’m taking you out first.
Dave grimaces. He and Nurse Grace leave.
INT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
DAVE
Are you ready?
NURSE GRACE
Ready for what?
DAVE
Ready to tell me what’s really going on in this place? I feel like I’m trapped in a scam.
NURSE GRACE
I honestly don’t know what you’re talking about.
DAVE
How could you not know but that Red Haines does?
NURSE GRACE
What’d she say?
DAVE
She implied this place is one big insurance scam. Do you know anything about it?
NURSE GRACE
No.
DAVE
Then I’m through with you.
Dave walks ahead of her.
NURSE GRACE
Wait!
Dave stops and turns.
NURSE GRACE
I don’t know anything because I just started here a week ago.
DAVE
Oh, in that case I’m sorry I doubted you.
Dave walks back toward her.
NURSE GRACE
It’s okay. I just want you to know in ten years of nursing, I’ve always put my patients first.
Dave gazes into her eyes.
DAVE
You want to know something?
NURSE GRACE
What?
DAVE
I believe you.
Nurse Cross appears in the cafeteria doorway.
NURSE CROSS
You two, get in here!
They rush up the hallway.
NURSE CROSS
(to Dave)
You have five minutes to eat.
INT. CAFETERIA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave walks up to the cafeteria counter. Marcus King glowers at him from his table. The other patients look a little bit afraid of Dave who takes a table by himself again.
NURSE CROSS
(to Nurse Grace)
You’re new here, Grace. One of the first rules is never get attached to the patients.
NURSE GRACE
I–
NURSE CROSS
Nev. Er. Do you hear me?
NURSE GRACE
Yes, yes I do.
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — LATER THAT NIGHT
Marcus SNORES loudly in his bed. Annoyed, Dave stares at the ceiling. Nurse Grace appears in the doorway with the vitals cart.
NURSE GRACE
Mr. Warner, Mr. King, time for vitals.
DAVE
It’s midnight.
NURSE GRACE
And another nurse will be back at 4 a.m.
DAVE
How can anyone get better in this place if you don’t let them sleep?
NURSE GRACE
Center rules. Do you mind sitting up?
DAVE
I didn’t when it was easier.
Wincing from the pain in his ribs, he sits up. Nurse Grace puts her mouth near his ear.
NURSE GRACE
(whispers)
Mr. Warner, I have something urgent to tell you.
DAVE
You dug a hole so I can escape?
NURSE GRACE
No. I read the medical records the hospital sent over with you.
DAVE
And?
NURSE GRACE
You need to be really careful not to get in any more fights.
DAVE
Why?
NURSE GRACE
You have facial fractures.
DAVE
I already know that. The hospital said they were minor and I was in stable condition.
NURSE GRACE
I shouldn’t tell you this but that’s not exactly true.
DAVE
It’s not!
Marcus stops snoring and stirs.
DAVE
(whispers)
I mean, It’s not.
NURSE GRACE
No. You have three cleanly broken bones.
DAVE
Where?
NURSE GRACE
One’s in your brow, right here.
She points to his brow just to the left of his nose.
NURSE GRACE
One’s in your eye socket, right–
DAVE
I have a broken eye socket!!!???
NURSE GRACE
Yes. Let me finish. And one’s deep inside your cheek.
DAVE
That must be why my mouth flexes when I eat.
NURSE GRACE
I’m afraid so. The hospital also said you were uncooperative and combative. That must be why Nurse Cross is all over you.
DAVE
That’s bull. They’re framing me, and I’m going to find out the whole story and nail them for it. Now that you know I have life-threatening injuries, can you get me out of here?
NURSE GRACE
I wish. The emergency room doctor ruled that you were stable enough to stay here.
DAVE
But I’m not.
NURSE GRACE
I know.
DAVE
None of this makes sense.
NURSE GRACE
No, it doesn’t.
DAVE
Can you give me my phone?
NURSE GRACE
Sorry, it’s in a secure closet. I don’t have access.
DAVE
Can I use your phone?
NURSE GRACE
Only Nurse Cross is allowed to have a personal phone in here.
DAVE
Why?
NURSE GRACE
Something about patient privacy.
DAVE
Can… Can you call a lawyer for me?
NURSE GRACE
No, I’m sorry. I have a young son. I need this job.
DAVE
I don’t want to get you in trouble. What should I do?
NURSE GRACE
If you can make it two more days–
DAVE
Without bleeding out or having a stroke.
NURSE GRACE
You let me know the second you feel anything unusual.
DAVE
What if you’re not here?
NURSE GRACE
Nurse Cross–
DAVE
Will make sure I bleed out faster.
Marcus wakes up.
MARCUS KING
You two, shut the hell up.
NURSE GRACE
Let me finish taking your vitals.
Nurse Grace takes Dave’s temperature and blood pressure.
DAVE
How am I doing?
NURSE GRACE
Your blood pressure’s a little high.
DAVE
No surprise there.
NURSE GRACE
Promise me you won’t fight anymore.
DAVE
Don’t tell me, tell him.
Marcus glowers at Dave. Nurse Grace takes Marcus’s vitals.
NURSE GRACE
How do you feel?
MARCUS KING
Mad as hell.
NURSE GRACE
Why?
MARCUS KING
You put that narc in my room.
DAVE
I’m not a narc.
MARCUS KING
Prove it.
DAVE
Would a narc punch his own lights out?
MARCUS KING
How do I know that’s not some kind of make-up or something?
DAVE
Nurse Grace, are my injuries real?
NURSE GRACE
Very.
MARCUS KING
I don’t trust neither of you.
NURSE GRACE
I have other patients to tend to. Please no fighting.
MARCUS KING
I ain’t promising nothing.
NURSE GRACE
(to Dave)
I know you’ll do the right thing.
Dave forces a smile. Nurse Grace leaves. Dave stares at the ceiling. Red Haines slips into the room.
RED HAINES
Daddy.
Red slips into Marcus’s bed.
DAVE
You have to be kidding me.
MARCUS KING
Turn the other way and keep your mouth shut.
Dave turns the other way and shakes his head in disbelief.
RED HAINES
What would Daddy like tonight?
MARCUS KING
The usual.
RED HAINES
Oh, Daddy.
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — 10:30 A.M., NEXT DAY
Dave sits in an uncomfortable chair and watches the patients watch Cops. The COPS raid a drug house. The living room table is full of drugs.
NICK DEAN
Man, look at all that shit. When I get out, first stop my friendly neighborhood dealer.
LENA CARTER
My man knows to have my stash ready for me.
DAVE
Has anyone ever been successfully treated in this place?
The patients LAUGH at him.
DAVE
Sorry I asked.
MARCUS KING
Narc.
DAVE
Nope. Just trying to figure out what’s going on here. I’m ruling out addiction treatment. I haven’t seen Dr. Bain since yesterday and the nurse told me I might never see him again.
NICK DEAN
Dr. Bain’s a tool. No one sees him after check-in.
DAVE
Do you have group therapy sessions?
NICK DEAN
If they can find a flunky psych student to hold one, which isn’t very often.
DAVE
What a racket.
MITCH DRUMMOND, a stocky retired veteran, enters the TV area and sits next to Dave.
DAVE
Welcome to the nuthouse. I’m Dave.
MITCH
Mitch.
They shake hands.
DAVE
What are you in here for?
MITCH
I… I don’t really know. I went to the hospital–
DAVE
Venice Memorial?
MITCH
Yes, how’d you know?
DAVE
Why’d you go there?
MITCH
Well, I was having pain in my chest so my wife took me to the hospital. When I was in the emergency room, a nurse–
DAVE
Nurse Pritchard?
MITCH
How’d you know?
DAVE
Keep going.
MITCH
Well, Nurse Pritchard checked me out and said I had pleurisy, something to do with inflamed lungs. I guess it was from a cold I had. She said she was going to check me in for observation.
DAVE
And?
MITCH
When my wife went home to get my things, Nurse Pritchard asked me how many alcoholic drinks I had a day. I said two or three. The next thing I knew she had me sign some papers and an ambulance brought me here. They wouldn’t even let me call my wife to tell her they transferred me. I hope someone told her where I am.
Nurse Grace walks by.
DAVE
Excuse me for a second, Mitch. Nurse Grace, how many beds are empty today?
NURSE GRACE
We’re filled to capacity. Why?
DAVE
Nothing.
Nurse Grace continues on her way.
MITCH
Why’d you ask her that?
DAVE
I have a theory.
MITCH
What?
DAVE
I need to gather more information before I tell you.
MITCH
I’ll appreciate anything you come up with because none of this makes sense to me.
DAVE
Did they at least treat your pleurisy?
MITCH
They gave me Tylenol and an anti-biotic. What are you doing here?
DAVE
I’ll let you know when I find out for sure.
Mitch looks confused.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Grace walks up to Nurse Cross who is seated at the computer.
NURSE GRACE
Here’s the report.
Nurse Grace sets down a folder.
NURSE CROSS
What was Mr. Warner just speaking about with you?
NURSE GRACE
He wanted to know how many beds we have left.
NURSE CROSS
Why?
NURSE GRACE
He didn’t say. Maybe he wants to be moved away from Mr. King before they have another fight.
NURSE CROSS
Maybe. Can you watch the desk for me? I’ll be back in a few minutes.
NURSE GRACE
Sure.
Nurse Cross goes to the conference room and makes a call.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
NURSE CROSS
We need to talk.
INT. NURSING STATION, ER, VENICE MEMORIAL HOSPITAL — CONTINUOUS
Holding her cell phone to her ear, Nurse Pritchard looks around and sees no one.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What is it?
NURSE CROSS
Did you notice anything unusual about David Warner?
NURSE PRITCHARD
He was mouthy and aggressive with me and everyone else. Why?
NURSE CROSS
Do you know his occupation?
NURSE PRITCHARD
No, I didn’t see it in his intake forms. He was unconscious, so they couldn’t do a thorough report.
NURSE CROSS
Hmmm…
NURSE PRITCHARD
Hmmm. What?
NURSE CROSS
He seems awfully snoopy.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What are you going to do?
NURSE CROSS
Find out who he really is and what he’s up to.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Keep me posted.
NURSE CROSS
I will.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Wait.
NURSE CROSS
What?
NURSE PRITCHARD
What are you going to do if you find out he really is a snoop?
Nurse Cross looks out at Marcus.
NURSE CROSS
I have a few ideas.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Well, let me know what you find. I can’t afford to lose this side hustle.
NURSE CROSS
Me either.
Nurse Dandy approaches Nurse Pritchard.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Gotta go.
They hang up.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Cross returns to the desk.
NURSE CROSS
Thank you for covering.
NURSE GRACE
Is everything ok?
NURSE CROSS
Yes, of course.
Nurse Cross sits at the computer. Nurse Grace leaves. Nurse Cross types David Warner, Los Angeles, into a search engine.
The results show David Warner, Private Investigator. Nurse Cross clicks on his website link and reaches a homepage with Dave’s photo on it.
NURSE CROSS
Nurse Grace.
NURSE GRACE
Yes.
NURSE CROSS
Can you cover for me, again?
NURSE GRACE
Of course.
Nurse Cross closes the browser window.
NURSE GRACE
Are you sure everything’s okay?
NURSE CROSS
Honestly, no. But it’s going to be.
Nurse Cross goes to the conference room.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Cross takes out her cell phone and calls Nurse Pritchard.
NURSE CROSS
We got a problem.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave sees Nurse Grace alone and approaches the desk.
DAVE
Can I ask you a question?
NURSE GRACE
Yes.
DAVE
Do you get a lot of patients from Venice Memorial Hospital?
NURSE GRACE
I guess so.
DAVE
Most of your patients?
NURSE GRACE
No, maybe a quarter of them.
DAVE
Why?
NURSE GRACE
Because they need addiction treatment.
DAVE
But doesn’t it seem odd with so many other hospitals and treatment centers around here that you’re cornering the market on Venice Memorial patients? They’re two hours from here.
NURSE GRACE
I never thought about it.
DAVE
Have you noticed a lot of the patients from Venice Memorial Hospital don’t really need addiction treatment?
NURSE GRACE
It’s not really my job to decide that.
DAVE
Let me put it another way, do you think everyone in here needs addiction treatment?
NURSE GRACE
Well…
DAVE
Come on.
NURSE GRACE
Most do, a few don’t.
DAVE
Do I?
NURSE GRACE
I really shouldn’t answer that question.
DAVE
Tell me as a friend, not a patient.
NURSE GRACE
Well, I probably would have treated your facial fractures before I considered whether or not you needed addiction treatment. Why are you asking me so many questions?
DAVE
I have a hunch.
NURSE GRACE
A hunch about what?
DAVE
I need more information before I can tell you.
Nurse Cross walks out of the conference room.
DAVE
Gotta go.
Nurse Cross eyes Dave with suspicion when he walks past her.
NURSE CROSS
(to Nurse Grace)
What did he want?
Nurse Grace thinks.
NURSE GRACE
He… He wanted to know if he could have Ibuprofen added to his meds.
NURSE CROSS
He already gets Ibuprofen.
NURSE GRACE
Oh, I guess he wasn’t sure.
NURSE CROSS
You guess? Remember what I told you, Nurse Grace, getting close to the patients is a very bad idea. Getting close to that one is downright dangerous.
NURSE GRACE
Dangerous?
Nurse Cross nods.
NURSE GRACE
Why?
NURSE CROSS
I just spoke with his psychiatrist.
NURSE GRACE
Psychiatrist?
NURSE CROSS
Yes, he’s been in therapy since he was a teen.
NURSE GRACE
What’s wrong with him?
NURSE CROSS
He’s a psychopath and a pathological liar. His shrink said he lies like we breathe.
NURSE GRACE
Huh.
NURSE CROSS
You seem surprised.
NURSE GRACE
He didn’t seem like a liar.
NURSE CROSS
What did he tell you?
NURSE GRACE
Nothing in particular. He just seems so normal.
NURSE CROSS
I’ve been at this twenty years. Those are the ones you have to look out for — for the sake of both of you.
Nurse Cross walks away. Nurse Grace appears concerned by her warning.
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — LATER THAT NIGHT
Dave stares at the ceiling while Marcus snores. Nurse Grace comes in with the vitals cart.
NURSE GRACE
(sounding cold and official)
Time to take your vitals.
DAVE
I need your help.
NURSE GRACE
That’s why I’m taking your vitals.
DAVE
Why are you being so cold?
NURSE GRACE
You’re a patient, Mr. Warner. We can’t be friends.
DAVE
Who says?
NURSE GRACE
I’d rather not say.
DAVE
Nurse Cross. She’s had it in for me from the moment I walked in here and maybe before that.
NURSE GRACE
You say the strangest things. Now let me take your temperatures.
She puts the thermometer in his mouth. He locks eyes with her. She looks away. The thermometer beeps.
NURSE GRACE
Let me cuff your arm.
DAVE
You know, if you help me, I’ll make sure you don’t take the blame.
NURSE GRACE
Take the blame for what?
DAVE
The scam.
NURSE GRACE
There’s no scam I’m aware of.
DAVE
What are the odds of Venice Memorial Hospital railroading two patients here who don’t need addiction treatment within a day of each other?
NURSE GRACE
I have no idea what you’re talking about.
DAVE
Zero. And I’m willing to bet there are other patients on the ward who’ve been dumped here for their insurance money, too. Will you help me find the information I need to crack the case?
NURSE GRACE
I really don’t know what you’re talking about.
DAVE
All I need is for you to let me in the file room or check it yourself.
NURSE GRACE
What would I look for?
DAVE
You already saw my file. Venice Memorial Hospital said I was aggressive and combative to their doctors and nurses and in immediate need of alcohol treatment when I was neither. They lied in my file to justify sending me here.
NURSE GRACE
Why would they do that?
DAVE
I don’t know for sure yet, but there’s usually money involved. Someone’s probably getting a kickback for referrals.
NURSE GRACE
I… I don’t want to get involved in that.
DAVE
You already are. Can I count on you to help me? I just need information on a few more patients who have been railroaded here to prove the scam.
Nurse Grace considers his words.
NURSE GRACE
I’ll tell you what. I’ll take a look. If I see anything I’ll let you know, but the rest is up to you.
DAVE
That’s all I ask.
INT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD
Nurse Grace emerges from Dave’s room. Nurse Cross walks out of the neighboring room.
NURSE CROSS
How are Mr. Warner and Mr. King?
NURSE GRACE
Mr. King! I almost forgot!
NURSE CROSS
How could you forget him?
NURSE GRACE
I… I guess I was distracted.
NURSE CROSS
Dave Warner was telling more lies?
NURSE GRACE
He–
NURSE CROSS
Don’t let it happen again.
Nurse Grace goes back into Dave’s room.
ACT 3 Do No Harm
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Grace enters.
DAVE
Back so fast?
NURSE GRACE
Nurse Cross reminded me to take Mr. King’s vitals.
DAVE
(suspicious)
So she was near the door when we were talking?
NURSE GRACE
I hope not.
Dave looks suspicious.
DAVE
Get back to me about the files as soon as you can tomorrow.
NURSE GRACE
What’s the rush?
DAVE
Tomorrow’s my last full day here, and there’s an outside chance Nurse Cross is onto us.
NURSE GRACE
You don’t think she’s involved in the scam?
DAVE
Oh, but I do.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — LATER THAT NIGHT
Nurse Cross sits at the main computer. Nurse Grace walks out of the file room.
NURSE CROSS
What were you doing in there?
NURSE GRACE
I, uh, I found a note that must have dropped out of a file so I returned it.
NURSE CROSS
Whose file?
NURSE GRACE
Mr. King’s.
NURSE CROSS
I have his file here.
NURSE GRACE
Oh, then I must have misfiled it.
NURSE CROSS
What’s really going on?
NURSE GRACE
N-nothing.
NURSE CROSS
I’m going to ask you one more time. What’s. Really. Going. On? This is your last chance to come clean.
Nurse Grace trembles.
NURSE GRACE
I have to complete my rounds.
Nurse Grace leaves. Nurse Cross glowers at her. Nurse Cross picks up the phone.
NURSE CROSS
Security.
(pause)
We need to talk in private. I’ll meet you in the gym.
EXT. PARKING LOT, TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC — 4 A.M. THE NEXT MORNING
Nurse Grace walks out into the dimly lit parking lot. Appearing creeped, then frantic, Nurse Grace approaches her car. The Security Guard stands up near the front of her car.
NURSE GRACE
Oh, thank God you’re out here.
SECURITY GUARD
What happened?
NURSE GRACE
Nothing. I’m just glad to see you. What are you doing out here?
SECURITY GUARD
My rounds.
NURSE GRACE
Oh, of course. Was there someone near my car?
SECURITY GUARD
Not some one. Some thing. I saw a big ol’ rat run this way. Let them under the hood, they’ll chew your wires.
NURSE GRACE
That’s not good.
SECURITY GUARD
No, it isn’t. I chased him off. You’re safe.
NURSE GRACE
Thank you.
Nurse Grace clicks her key to unlock her car door. The Security Guard opens it for her. She gets in the car. He looms over her in a way that’s unnerving.
SECURITY GUARD
Have a safe trip home.
NURSE GRACE
Thank…. Thank you.
Nurse Grace looks at him with concern, then he closes the door. Nurse Grace pulls out of the lot. The Security Guard watches her and shakes his head like what’s about to happen to her is too damn bad.
INT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — 1/2 HOUR LATER
Dave peers out his door and looks up and down the hallway. He can hear the night nurse taking vitals down the hall. She still has several rooms to go. Seeing no one in the hallway he slips up the hallway toward the nurse’s desk.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave gets low behind the computer and clicks on the mouse. The computer screen lights up. The computer is password protected. Dave thinks then slides out a desk extension board. There are numerous sticky notes attached to it.
Dave looks at numbers and types them in. None of them log him in. The screen says he only gets one more try before he’ll be locked out. He thinks, then feels around under the desk board. He finds another sticky with numbers, letters and symbols on it. He types them in and the computer comes to life.
Dave types in Tampa Bay Behavioral Clinic. The website appears on the screen. He clicks on news. A series of article summaries appear with titles like: Addiction Clinic Under Investigation for Fraud, Patient Sues Behavioral Clinic for Wrongful Detainment, Abuse Alleged at Tampa Bay Behavioral Clinic.
DAVE
Holy shit!
NURSE CROSS
Holy shit is right.
Dave’s surprised to see Nurse Cross looming over him.
DAVE
Don’t you ever go home?
NURSE CROSS
My replacement’s running late.
What do you think you’re doing?
DAVE
I…I’m trying to figure out what’s really going on here. And I’m pretty sure I just did.
NURSE CROSS
Those articles are all lies.
DAVE
I’d almost believe you if there was one or two articles, not whole pages of them. When I get out of here today, I’m lawyering up.
NURSE CROSS
You mean if you get out of here today.
DAVE
Are you threatening me?
NURSE CROSS
No, of course not. I’d never, ever do that. But I can tell you after doctor Bain and our attorneys read your behavior report, I can’t see how they’ll let you out today.
DAVE
You can’t keep me.
NURSE CROSS
Oh, but we can. You’ve broken every rule but trying to jump the fence. The police won’t like to hear that. If you think we’re bad, wait til you spend a night in the county jail or a state mental health hospital.
DAVE
I’m actually trying to right a wrong.
NURSE CROSS
You don’t know right from wrong.
DAVE
What are you talking about?
NURSE CROSS
Dr. Bain determined you’re a sociopath and a pathological liar.
DAVE
Dr. Bain met me for fifteen minutes, he doesn’t know squat about me.
NURSE CROSS
You really are delusional. Now go back to your room until breakfast.
DAVE
No.
NURSE CROSS
No?
DAVE
I want out of here, right now.
NURSE CROSS
The police won’t be happy you cut your stay short.
DAVE
What can they do?
NURSE CROSS
I already told you. Send you off to a state mental hospital or charge you with a crime.
DAVE
A crime? I didn’t do anything.
NURSE CROSS
You just broke into our secure computer. You put patient privacy at risk.
DAVE
You can’t prove it.
Nurse Cross points at a webcam.
NURSE CROSS
I don’t have to. Now go to your room.
Dave glowers at her. Nurse Cross watches him walk back to his room. Nurse Cross calls the Security Guard.
NURSE CROSS
I have another job for you.
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — NOON
The patients watch the local news on TV. Nurse Cross walks out of the conference room. A team of seven MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELORS are lined up shoulder to shoulder facing a table in the room.
DAVE
When are you going to let me out of here?
NURSE CROSS
That’s up to them?
DAVE
Who?
NURSE CROSS
The continuing care committee. You get to meet with them first.
DAVE
I don’t want to meet anyone. I want out.
NURSE CROSS
They’re the ones who advise Dr. Bain. Meet with them or I’m calling the police.
Dave SIGHS with resignation. He gets up and enters the conference room.
INT. CONFERENCE ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Mr. Warner?
Dave nods.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Have a seat.
Dave sits before them.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Do you know why you’re here?
DAVE
No, but I think I know why you’re here. To rip-off–
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
That wasn’t the question. Do you know why YOU’RE here?
DAVE
I tripped on a chair and broke my face. I’ve gone without medical treatment for my dangerous broken bones for three days. If you’re the care committee, why aren’t you making sure I get the medical care I really need?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
We’ll ask the questions. Are you an addict?
DAVE
I like a few social drinks.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
How many?
DAVE
Depends on the night and what I’m doing.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Do you think you have a drinking problem?
Dave shakes his head no.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
Hold out your hand flat like this.
Dave looks at her like she’s crazy.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Go on.
Dave holds his hand out. It looks steady.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
See!!!???
DAVE
See what?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
Your hand’s shaking. That’s a sure sign of alcohol withdrawal.
DAVE
My hand isn’t shaking.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
I saw it.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
We all saw it.
Dave holds his hand out again. It’s steady.
DAVE
Framing me again. Let’s cut to the chase, what are you going to do to me now?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Here’s your treatment plan.
She hands him a clipboard with a few pages on it.
DAVE
My treatment plan to follow when I get out of here?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
No, your treatment plan for the next two days.
DAVE
You’re only allowed to hold me for 72 hours. I complied, now you keep your side of the bargain.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
We can’t.
DAVE
Why not?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
A judge already signed off on two more days.
DAVE
A judge!!! You never let me talk to a judge!!!
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
It’s pretty standard procedure around here. We told him that you’ve been combative and argumentative, which you have, and we think a few more days would help.
DAVE
What did my insurance company say?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
They pre-approved your stay.
DAVE
The one time they don’t put up a fight… I don’t care what you, the judge or the insurance company say. I want out of here now.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
You know there’s a police station just up the street.
DAVE
You’d really do that to me?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
We’re only trying to protect you and the public.
DAVE
You’re trying to line your pockets.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
We have other patients to see. Are you going to sign your care plan, or not?
DAVE
Alright, alright, I’ll sign. But wait til I talk to that judge.
Mental Health Counselor 2 snickers.
DAVE
What’s that for?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
You don’t get to talk to the judge.
DAVE
Why not?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
By the time we arrange an appointment, it’ll be three more days. You’ll be free by then.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Times up. Sign it.
Dave signs and dates the form.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Don’t you feel better now?
DAVE
I’m going to feel better when I see you all in court.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
You’ll never break your addiction until you learn how to deal with your anger in a healthy way.
DAVE
Collecting damages will be the perfect cure. Are you through abusing me?
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
You may go.
Dave leaves the room.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
He’s every bit as delusional as Nurse Cross said he is.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 2
She really is throwing the book at him.
MENTAL HEALTH COUNSELOR 1
Maybe it’ll knock the chip off his shoulder.
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave walks over and sits next to Mitch.
MITCH
Did they sign your release papers?
DAVE
No, I’m here for another two days.
MITCH
How can they do that to you?
DAVE
Follow the money.
MITCH
What’s that mean?
DAVE
I’ll tell you later.
Nick Dean points at the TV. A photo of Nurse Grace appears on screen.
NICK DEAN
Hey, that’s Nurse Grace!
Dave leans forward with interest.
CUT TO: TV
EXT. CANAL BY HIGHWAY, WESLEY CHAPEL, FL — CONTINUOUS
The report cuts to a reporter standing next to Nurse Grace’s car, which is covered in mud from driving into the canal.
REPORTER
Witnesses told police it looked like a front tire blew before the victim’s car plunged into the canal. Good samaritans rushed to help her, but her car was upside down in mud with the doors pinned shut. By the time firefighters were able to get her out of the car, she was lifeless. Paramedics declared her dead at the scene.
CUT TO: SCENE
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Dave’s eyes tear up. He appears simultaneously enraged and sad. A couple of the patients start to cry.
DAVE
(mutters)
I never should’ve got her involved.
LENA CARTER.
Man, oh, man Nurse Grace. She was one of the good ones.
NICK DEAN
The best.
TASHA JACKSON
I hope she didn’t suffer.
RED HAINES
I don’t miss that bitch. Always spying on me.
DAVE
Don’t call her a bitch, you–!
Nurse Cross walks by.
NURSE CROSS
Mr. Warner, you were warned.
NICK DEAN
Nurse Cross! Nurse Cross! Did you hear?
NURSE CROSS
Hear what?
NICK DEAN
Nurse Grace was in an accident.
NURSE CROSS
I told her to be careful driving early in the morning.
NICK DEAN
They… they said she’s dead.
Nurse Cross doesn’t seem surprised enough.
NURSE CROSS
Oh, my. I’ll have to tell Dr. Bain.
Dave looks at her with suspicion.
DAVE
Don’t you want to know how it happened?
NURSE CROSS
Of… Of course.
DAVE
Her tire blew out. Her car landed upside down in a canal.
NURSE CROSS
That’s horrible. I have to go tell Dr. Bain.
DAVE
Do you know why her tire blew out?
NURSE CROSS
Of course not!
DAVE
I think you and every ghoul in here knows.
Nurse Cross rushes out.
MITCH
Nurse Cross didn’t seem all that surprised or sad.
DAVE
That’s because she isn’t. Can I ask you a favor?
MITCH
Of course.
DAVE
This place is officially radioactive. You cover my back, I’ll cover yours.
MITCH
Can you tell me why?
DAVE
No, I don’t want you to get wrapped up in my nightmare. Just be there when I need you and I’ll do the same.
MITCH
Ok.
Dave walks away.
INT. NURSE’S DESK, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT CENTER — EVENING
The pharmacist walks out of his booth. The patients are watching TV. Marcus and Red make-out on the couch.
PHARMACIST
The meds are all set. I’m going to grab a quick smoke before we distribute them.
NURSE CROSS
You know one of these days that nasty habit’s going to kill you.
PHARMACIST
At least I’ll go with a smile on my face.
The pharmacist leaves the ward. Nurse Cross looks around to make sure the coast is clear then slips into the pharmacy.
INT. PHARMACY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT CENTER — EVENING
Nurse Cross finds Marcus’s meds. She drops two capsules filled with PCP into his cup and hides them beneath other pills.
She slips out.
INT. NURSING STATION, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Cross returns to her desk. Dave walks out of his room. Nurse Cross glowers at him.
DAVE
May the best person win.
NURSE CROSS
What?
DAVE
You know what. I’m not stupid, I know I’m in danger. I have a feeling only one of us is going to walk out of here alive. I’m going to make sure it’s me.
NURSE CROSS
Are you threatening me?
DAVE
No, are you?
Dave walks away.
The pharmacist opens his roll-up window.
NURSE CROSS
Everyone in line for meds!
They all line up. The pharmacist distributes meds to Nick Dean and Lena Carter. Marcus is up next.
PHARMACIST
Marcus King.
MARCUS KING
You know me.
PHARMACIST
Of course I do.
The pharmacist hands Marcus his cup of meds.
MARCUS KING
You better not short me.
PHARMACIST
I’m not your dealer, I’m your pharmacist.
MARCUS KING
You heard me.
PHARMACIST
I didn’t short you. Do you want me to count out and name your medications?
Nurse Cross rushes over.
NURSE CROSS
Marcus, we have a whole ward waiting behind you.
Dave watches this with curiosity.
MARCUS KING
I’m taking them.
Marcus belts down the whole cup and drinks a cup of water.
MARCUS KING
(to Nurse Cross)
There, you happy?
NURSE CROSS
Thank you.
(to others)
Now, I don’t want any monkey business from the rest of you.
Dave nudges Mitch, who’s standing in front of him.
DAVE
(whispers)
Keep an eye on Marcus.
MITCH
I always keep an eye on Marcus. He’s a powder keg.
DAVE
No, seriously. I think they drugged him.
MITCH
It’ll be hard to notice the difference.
PHARMACIST
Mitch Drummond.
MITCH
Yes, sir.
PHARMACIST
Here you go.
The pharmacist hands Mitch his cup. He downs it.
MITCH
Thank you.
PHARMACIST
David Warner.
Dave takes his cup and studies it.
DAVE
Can I ask you a favor?
PHARMACIST
Sure.
DAVE
Count and name my pills.
Nurse Cross rushes over.
NURSE CROSS
No!
DAVE
No! Why are you so eager for me to take my meds without knowing what’s in the cup?
NURSE CROSS
I’m not eager about any such thing. I’m just tired of you people slowing down the process.
DAVE
(to Pharmacist)
Please.
The pharmacist looks to Nurse Cross, who nods. The pharmacist spreads the half dozen pills on a paper towel.
PHARMACIST
Let’s see here. We have Ativan, Ibuprofen, a multi-vitamin, vitamin E, vitamin C and a stool softener –thanks to your friends in the cafeteria.
DAVE
You sure?
PHARMACIST
That’s it. Nothing more, nothing less.
NURSE CROSS
See? You’re paranoid just like Dr. Bain said.
DAVE
Did you ever hear the saying: “Just because I’m paranoid doesn’t mean there isn’t someone out to get me”?
NURSE CROSS
Stop playing games.
Dave downs the pills with a cup of water and walks away.
PHARMACIST
I can’t figure out that one.
NURSE CROSS
That’s why I’m here.
INT. TV ROOM AREA, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — ONE HOUR LATER
The patients watch TV while Dave and Mitch play cards at a small table. Dave eyes Marcus who seems extra irritable and uncomfortable in his own skin. Red Haines climbs in his lap.
MARCUS KING
I ain’t in the mood.
RED HAINES
But Daddy–
He shoves her off his lap.
MARCUS KING
I said I ain’t in the mood.
RED HAINES
What’s wrong with you?
MARCUS KING
I don’t answer to anyone.
Red storms out of the room.
CANDY
How ‘bout some Candy?
MARCUS KING
Stay out of my face.
The patients watch TV in silence.
MITCH
What’s wrong with him?
DAVE
I think Nurse Cross spiked his meds.
MITCH
Why would she do that?
DAVE
Who do Nurse Cross and Marcus hate most?
MITCH
You.
DAVE
That’s right.
MITCH
What should we do?
DAVE
What can we do? We’re inmates in the asylum until our time is up. Remember: You cover my back, I cover yours.
Mitch nods.
INT. DAVE’S ROOM, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — LATER THAT NIGHT
Dave SNORES. Marcus rolls around. Nurse Cross appears at the door with a drugged and groggy Red Haines. Nurse Cross points at Dave’s bed.
NURSE CROSS
There’s your bed, honey.
RED HAINES
Thank… Thank you.
Red climbs into Dave’s bed and wraps her arms around him fron behind. Dave wakes up.
DAVE
What the–
MARCUS KING
What the what?
Marcus rolls over and sees Red in bed with Dave and is enraged.
MARCUS KING
You gonna die!
DAVE
I didn’t–
RED HAINES
Oh, Daddy.
Marcus yanks Dave out of bed and throws him against the wall.
MARCUS KING
Steal my woman, you die!
Nurse Cross, Nick and Mitch run in. Marcus throws Dave around the room. Every time he regains his footing, Marcus strikes him again.
NURSE CROSS
Stop it! Stop it!
Mitch leaps on Marcus from behind and pins his arms together. Marcus slams back agains the wall, knocking the air out of Mitch. Mitch falls to the floor gasping.
Marcus leaps over a bed and throws Dave into the bathroom. Dave slams against the wall and falls to the floor. Dave gets up and runs at Marcus. Marcus deflects him into the shower and starts beating on him.
NURSE CROSS
Stop it! Stop it now!
DAVE
You did this!
Marcus slams Dave against the shower wall. Dave escapes him. Then shoves Nurse Cross into the shower. Marcus hesitates, eyes her and growls.
NURSE CROSS
Marcus, it’s me! Nurse Cross!
Marcus slams her head against the wall.
MARCUS KING
Narc! Narc! Cheating son of a bitch, Narc!
Nurse Cross collapses on the floor in a bloody heap. Marcus sees Dave and is enraged again.
MARCUS KING
You!!!
He runs after Dave through their room.
INT. HALLWAY, ADULT ADDICTION TREATMENT WARD — CONTINUOUS
Marcus chases Dave up the hallway to the ward doors.
MARCUS KING
You’re dead, Narc!
Marcus is almost on top of Dave when the doors open. Dave falls backward into the outer hallway. The Security Guard draws his handgun.
SECURITY GUARD
Freeze, Marcus!
MARCUS KING
I ain’t freezing for no one!
Marcus charges the guard. The guard shoots him. Marcus continues to charge him. The guard unloads his handgun on him. Marcus stumbles and falls dead on the floor.
The Security Guard looks at Dave.
DAVE
Am I next?
SECURITY GUARD
I… I don’t know what you’re talking about.
DAVE
No one ever does in this place.
The Security Guard holsters his gun and speaks into a microphone on his lapel.
SECURITY GUARD
Wesley Chapel Dispatch, this is Tampa Bay Behavioral. Code Red. Code Red.
INT. FRONT LOBBY, ADULT ADDICTION CENTER — NEXT MORNING
In his street clothes, Dave, all bandaged up, paces the lobby with a limp. He has a notepad and pen in his hand. Mitch walks in.
DAVE
Thank you, buddy.
Dave shakes his hand.
MITCH
For what?
DAVE
You saved my life.
MITCH
I got wrecked.
DAVE
You slowed him down.
MITCH
Where are you going now?
DAVE
To see an attorney or two. You?
MITCH
My wife’s picking me up. She’s still frantic.
DAVE
As she should be.
MITCH
Can you tell me one thing?
DAVE
Yes.
MITCH
How, what, why?
DAVE
The law lets them get away with abusing patients, so they do. And there’s lots of money to be made running the scam.
MITCH
But they’re hospitals, doctors and nurses.
DAVE
It’ll never make sense to me either.
MITCH’S WIFE rushes in and hugs him. Tears pour down their cheeks.
MITCH’S WIFE
I though I’d never see you again.
MITCH
I… I had my doubts, too.
They part.
MITCH
I’d like you to meet Dave, Dave Warner. He’s the one who cracked the case.
DAVE
I wouldn’t say cracked it.
MITCH
What would you say?
Dave considers the question and smiles.
DAVE
Ok, maybe cracked it fits the bill, but I won’t feel like I really cracked the case until I shut down the laws that make disappearing people like this possible.
Mitch’s wife hugs him.
MITCH’S WIFE
Thank you. Thank you for saving Mitch.
MITCH
Can we give you a ride back to Venice?
DAVE
No, no thanks. I need time to organize my notes. A long Uber ride will about do it.
Mitch and Dave shake hands. Mitch and his wife leave. Mitch turns.
MITCH
Your Uber just pulled in.
DAVE
Thanks.
Dave limps out the door.
EXT. TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC, WESLEY CHAPEL, FL — CONTINUOUS
Police cars fill the driveway. Dave watches as OFFICERS lead Dr. Bain and the Security Guard, both handcuffed toward cruisers. Dave smiles and winks. Dr. Bain glowers at him and looks away. The security guard smiles like he has it all under control.
DAVE
(mutters)
Psychopath.
Dave sees the Uber and gets in back.
INT. UBER — CONTINUOUS
DAVE
I’m Dave Warner. I believe the treatment center is paying for my trip back to Venice.
Nurse Pritchard, disguised in thick sunglasses and a baseball cap, nods and pulls away.
Dave takes his cell phone out. It’s dead. Dave leans forward.
DAVE
Do you have an iPhone charger I can borrow?
The driver shakes her head no.
DAVE
You don’t talk much do you?
The driver shakes her head no.
Dave leans back and writes on his notepad.
EXT. TAMPA BAY BEHAVIORAL CLINIC, WESLEY CHAPEL, FL — CONTINUOUS
The driver pulls to the end of the driveway and signals right.
INT. UBER — CONTINUOUS
DAVE
Excuse me. I think you take a left turn to get to the highway.
The driver shrugs and keeps driving.
Dave start to write his notes but keeps looking up at the Uber driver.
DAVE
I don’t mean to bother you, but do you have any ID you can show me?
The Uber driver shakes her head no.
DAVE
Why not?
The Uber driver lowers her sunglasses. Dave sees her eyes in the rearview mirror.
DAVE
Nurse Pritchard?
NURSE PRITCHARD
You didn’t think you actually won, did you?
DAVE
Nurse Cross sure did.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Nurse Cross was a fool. I warned her not to let down her guard around you.
DAVE
Why’d you do it?
NURSE PRITCHARD
You really don’t know?
DAVE
I know the part where you sent poor patients who didn’t need addiction counseling up here for a kickback. But there’s gotta be more.
NURSE PRITCHARD
What if I told you there is?
DAVE
Let’s hear it.
NURSE PRITCHARD
You have to make me a promise first.
DAVE
Shoot.
NURSE PRITCHARD
I need you to use your experience to help me disappear.
DAVE
That’s not my specialty.
NURSE PRITCHARD
No, but, from what I’ve seen you’re a very quick learner. Can you do it?
DAVE
I can do my best. Now what’s the rest of the story?
NURSE PRITCHARD
The morning they wheeled you in to the ER…
DAVE
Yes.
NURSE PRITCHARD
I recognized you and your name.
DAVE
How? We never met.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Oh, but we did. You came here to investigate a bank embezzler.
DAVE
How’d you know that?
NURSE PRITCHARD
He was my boyfriend. He told me he was tipped off by a bank executive.
DAVE
You know Tom Anderson? Where is he?
NURSE PRITCHARD
He already disappeared, and he took all our cash with him.
DAVE
So you want to disappear, find him and wring his neck?
NURSE PRITCHARD
All’s fair in love and war.
EXT. TWO-LANE ROAD, WESLEY CHAPEL, FLORIDA — CONTINUOUS
Nurse Pritchard turns down a dusty road, turns the car around in a clearing, and stops under a tree.
INT. UBER — CONTINUOUS
DAVE
What are we doing here? We have an agreement.
NURSE PRITCHARD
We do.
She takes a card off the dashboard and hands it to him.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Here’s my secure contact information.
DAVE
How can I help you disappear if I can’t see you?
NURSE PRITCHARD
We both know everything can be done online.
DAVE
What do you want me to do now?
Nurse Pritchard aims a gun at him.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Get out.
DAVE
Can’t I at least get a ride home?
NURSE PRITCHARD
That would make us both fools. Out.
Dave SIGHS and gets out of the car, leaving his .
DAVE
What ever happened to “Do no harm?”
NURSE PRITCHARD
That’s for suckers.
DAVE
What if I can’t make you disappear?
She rubs the trigger.
NURSE PRITCHARD
I’ll make it quick and painless.
DAVE
You’re harsh.
NURSE PRITCHARD
Understatement.
EXT. DIRT ROAD, WESLEY CHAPEL, FLORIDA — CONTINUOUS
Dave eyes a rock near the driver’s side door. Nurse Pritchard puts the car in gear.
DAVE
Wait! I forgot my notepad.
Nurse Pritchard turns to see it. Dave picks up the rock and breaks her window. Nurse Pritchard reaches for her handgun. Dave punches her, knocking her out cold.
DAVE
How’s that for disappeared?
Dave reaches in her car, retrieves the gun and finds her cell phone in her purse. He initiates an emergency call.
DAVE
This is Dave Warner.
(pause)
Yes from the treatment center.
(pause)
I’m fine, thank you. Listen, can you send someone to pick up me and an unconscious nurse?
(pause)
Yes, she seems to have hit her face on something.
(mutters)
Oh, the irony.
Dave throws the phone down and sits on the car hood waiting for the police.
THE END
Sarasota Memorial Hospital Has A Dangerous Secret 